Posted by Vessey (Calgary, Canada) on 15 February 2007 in People & Portraits.
I want to know whats wrong with this picture and what I can do to improve this style.
Thx for any comments and ideas
vessey
Vessey - you might cropping and filling frame with the girl....nice tones on her.... might crop too much..could oversaturate background....have fun! try several looks and see which one pleases you!
15 Feb 2007 8:42am
@Jerry: Hey Jerry, ya i tried cropping it really doesnt work for this shot . Next time i will try some different angles, i am going to play around with the saturation thx for the suggestions
Hey Vessey; you've got an interesting picture here so it's hard to say what's "wrong" - what do you feel is wrong? What were you hoping your picture would look like?
15 Feb 2007 11:16am
@Daroru: Hi Daroru, i think it looks out of proportion. I'm going for the main focus on the girl but showing whats going on in life around her.
Okay... I'm not very technical so bear with me... Maybe I would have lowered the camera angle a bit? Get more of the girl, less of the ceiling. You might still get that emphasis if you crop a bit of the ceiling away. I think that glass is a bit of a distractor too. It draws your eye down but it 's disconnected from what you want people to look at. I don't know if you want the guys in the background to be blurred or not, but if you wanted them clearer, you can set your camera to focus on fore and background areas. I'd move around a bit, take a few shots at different angles, keeping the girl on the right side, see what compositions grab you!
15 Feb 2007 9:47pm
@Daroru: thx for the suggestions i will give them a try
PREVIEW ONLY
Add your comment ...
Canon EOS REBEL XT1/13 secondF/4.0ISO 80018 mm
lounge
Vessey's Photoblog
Vessey's Photoblog